I always liked excerpts because they give a small taste of what a story is about beyond the synopsis. But I have a hard time picking the right excerpts for my stories. I never wanna share too much or too little, or a part that might turn readers off. Often conflicted.

This is one I picked out from Hot In Here:

As Meka approached
with the unmistakable glare of lust roaming her eyes, thick beads of sweat commenced to
trickle down both their faces. She couldn’t believe it. She was
about to do the damn fuckin’
thang with her man’s little brother. What fucked her up even
more was the lack of hesitance
she portrayed. No shame. No resistance from within. The thought of
being a bad girl compelled
her to lurch in for the kill.

Meka paused in front
of Jacob and elected to tease him for a second, knowing that anticipation would
make it sweeter for both of them in the end. She took a finger and
designed various shapes in
the slickness of his perspired chest. Manhood rising from each
caress, he smiled, tilted his
neck, and leaned in for a synergetic tongue kiss.

The tandem of his
mouth and tongue melted Meka instantly, causing the temperature of her body to soar
immensely. Her pussy moistened as he grabbed a firm hold of her
cheeks, stretching the
fabric up her crack like a pair of thongs. Feeling equally vicious,
Meka snagged a piece of Jacob’s
neck with her teeth, destined to make a mark of passion in the spot.
Oh yeah! He was about to get it
good. Possibly better than big brother ever experienced.

“Why you doin’
this?” he asked in between kisses.

But Meka ignored
him. After all, he was plenty engaged with a hand wandering her booty shorts and finding
its way in between her crack. Being the sturdy, strong man that he
was, knowing he could
physically reject Meka and she’d comply, she labeled his pleas
BULLSHIT and continued to
entice him. On trips back and forth from the U-Haul truck she felt
those sexy brown eyes of his
crawling down her spine and through the crease of her butt cheeks,
igniting a fire from afar as
she strutted her stuff when moving boxes into the apartment. Meka
caught young Jacob with his
tongue out when squatting to disassemble the computer with her cleavage
sitting perfectly in the little tank top. She wasn’t trying to bait
the boy in. It was 92 degrees out
and even more devastating inside — hot ass fuck! But now … 

Meka answered Jacob
by slurping and biting all over his neck, making it look as if he’d been attacked by a
swarm of blood craved mosquitoes. With passionate hunger, she clamped
her mouth around a
muscular pec, planning to work her way down to his crown jewel. But
young Jacob was a few
steps ahead of her. With fierce aggression, he flipped their position
by throwingher mid-section against the sink, then tugged the flesh of
her exposed bubble in his teeth as he sank to Meka’s
favorite level — ass to mouth!

Madness

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